Combine sketched drawings with rendered images. Add secondary and tertiary structure for harmony. Increase the rhythmic elements within the landscape and building. Where did the wickets go?... Visit the Kahn building. (I did on Saturday) How can the facade and rigid grid read like a piece of sheet music? Bring your models in. Keep working on your wall section. Elaborate on the secondary structure.. How can your curtain wall increase your rhythm?
These were all of the basic critiques that were given to me. I have some good work ahead of me. I've started sketching ideas and will elaborate tonight at class.
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